Rainy Day

Regular attendance helps students get better at school work

Rachel

16/05

Regular attendance helps students get better at school work.

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I think that children should come to school everyday because they will be better at their work and learning new stuff.

They will understand what the teacher is explaining and they will be able to finish the work . If children don’t attend school  regularly they will not do well at school.

Netball

I was so excited to go to netball I really enjoyed it and the coaches taught us some cool skills like bounce pass, shoulder pass, chest pass and overhead pass I had fun and I really wanted to go to netball because I haven’t been playing netball in ages. And I want to go again I like to play netball.

Trip to the beach

Name:Rachel

Date:03/05

title: Trip to the beach

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INTRO: In the holiday we were so excited to go to the beach,and it was so fun because we did lots of exciting things there.

BODY: At first my sister and I couldn’t wait to swim in the beach because it was nice and sunny.When my sister and I got to the beach we changed into our swimming togs.Then after we got into our togs we ran into the water to go for a swim.In the water we jumped over the waves and we played volley and it was so awesome.After that we had fried chicken and chips for lunch.After that we went to play on the park for a little while.Then we went back into the water and we carried on playing.After a while in the water we got out of our togs and we went home.

Conclusion:I felt very happy after swimming at the beach because it was so cool and fun.